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* [[Emesh (150)]]: I walk in the garden without fear As stars swirl across the sky And I stand amongst the tall lilies Who lift their faces to the passing eons. Here I will do no harm And no harm will come to me For at last my long journey is over And I am at home. | * [[Emesh (150)]]: I walk in the garden without fear As stars swirl across the sky And I stand amongst the tall lilies Who lift their faces to the passing eons. Here I will do no harm And no harm will come to me For at last my long journey is over And I am at home. | ||
* [[Lybistros (427)]]: Beautiful. Makes me feel calm and happy. | * [[Lybistros (427)]]: Beautiful. Makes me feel calm and happy. | ||
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- Emesh (150): I walk in the garden without fear As stars swirl across the sky And I stand amongst the tall lilies Who lift their faces to the passing eons. Here I will do no harm And no harm will come to me For at last my long journey is over And I am at home.
- Lybistros (427): Beautiful. Makes me feel calm and happy.
- Ovis (909): This is my new favorite of yours, I think. Although maybe Step by Step Towards the Nightingales might still win out. Let's say it's a tie.
- Aurinia (342): The words are definitely beautiful, but to me it seems like a poem about death.
- 1k (1000): An inspiring poem about being happy where you are.
- Ovis (909): Exactly. The value of having found yourself and your place. Being at peace.
- Emesh (150): Thank you for your thoughts, everyone, I really appreciate them.
- 1k (1000): I don't think our journey is over. Maybe it will never be over.
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- 1k (1000): I also feel that it's about death.
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